年度评估:用成绩谈加薪,谈不成也要谈出下一步
点「看一看」,Claire 和 Priya 就在这里把这一场演一遍;轮到你开口的 4 个地方会停下来,给你看要说的意思和三种说法。
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这一场在哪里,发生了什么?
周四下午 2 点,悉尼一家中型软件公司的小会议室,年度评估面谈(约 30 分钟)
今天是你的年度评估面谈,经理 Claire 主持,HR 业务伙伴 Priya 也在场,负责流程和记录。你这一年负责的两个项目都按时上线,还带了两个新人,你打算借这次机会提出加薪 10%。Claire 很认可你,但今年预算很紧。
和谁对话?
- Claire
- 澳大利亚口音。直属经理,认可你,说话直接,但预算很紧
- Priya
- 印度口音。HR 业务伙伴,讲流程,负责记录和后续安排
你要做到什么?
先用成绩开场:两个项目都按时上线;再说你多承担的工作:带了两个新人;明确提出涨 10%,并说明市场上同类岗位就在这个范围;如果现在给不了,争取约定六个月后再谈,并把目标写下来。
这一场轮到你开口 4 次:
- 讲成绩
- 讲多承担
- 提出数字
- 谈下一步
全文:这一场怎么说?
中英对照,不用注册。每一句都能点「听」,录音就是 App 里这一场的录音,只有角色的台词。轮到你的地方,写着你想说的意思、三种说法和值得记住的说法:能说清是短句,先保证对方听懂;自然是同事平时会说的;高密度更紧凑、信息更多。
Thanks for coming in. Priya from HR is joining us today, just to keep things on track.
谢谢你过来。HR 的 Priya 今天也参加,帮我们把流程走好。
听懂:keep things on track 让事情按流程进行
Hi! Since this is your annual review, notes go on your file. Please feel free to be open with us.
你好!这是年度评估,记录会进你的档案。有什么想法尽管直说。
听懂:annual review 年度评估 · go on your file 记入你的档案 · feel free to be open 尽管直说
So, let's start with you. How do you think this year went? What are you most proud of?
那先从你开始。你觉得这一年怎么样?最自豪的是什么?
听懂:most proud of 最自豪的
轮到你:讲成绩
用成绩开场:你负责的两个项目都按时上线。
你想说的意思:我觉得这一年挺好的。我负责的两个项目都按时上线了,没有延期。
- 能说清I think it went well. Both my projects went live on time.
- 自然I think it went really well. Both projects I owned went live on time, with no delays.
- 高密度Honestly, it's been a strong year. Both projects I owned went live on time, and we hit every deadline.
| 值得记住的说法 | 中文 |
|---|---|
| it's been a strong year | 这一年成绩不错比 it was good 更有分量 |
| Both projects I owned | 我负责的两个项目own a project=对项目全权负责 |
| went live on time | 按时上线 |
Thanks, that matches what I've heard from the team. What else did you take on this year?
谢谢,这和我从团队那儿听到的一致。今年你还承担了什么?
听懂:matches what I've heard 跟我听到的一致 · take on 承担
轮到你:讲多承担
说你承担了更多:带了两个新人,现在他们能独立工作。
你想说的意思:我还承担了更多工作:带了两个新人,现在他们已经能独立干活了。
- 能说清I also took on more work. I trained two new team members. Now they work on their own.
- 自然I also took on more. I mentored two new team members, and now they're working on their own.
- 高密度I also stepped up beyond my role: I mentored two new team members, and they're now working on their own.
| 值得记住的说法 | 中文 |
|---|---|
| stepped up beyond my role | 做了超出本职的事step up=主动多扛 |
| I mentored two new … | 我带了两个新……mentor=带新人、当导师 |
| working on their own | 能独立工作 |
Good, I'll note that down. Taking on more is something we really look at in this cycle.
好,我记下来。多承担工作正是这一轮评估很看重的。
听懂:note that down 记下来 · cycle (评估/调薪)周期
Now, you said you wanted to talk about pay. What did you have in mind?
你说想谈谈薪资。你心里的想法是?
听懂:pay 薪资 · What did you have in mind? 你是怎么想的
轮到你:提出数字
明确提出涨 10%,并说明市场上同类岗位就在这个范围。
你想说的意思:我希望涨 10%。我了解过,市场上同类岗位基本在这个范围,所以我觉得这是合理的。
- 能说清I'd like a ten percent raise. Similar roles in the market pay about that much.
- 自然I'd like to ask for a ten percent raise. Similar roles in the market are paying in that range.
- 高密度I'd like to ask for a ten percent raise. From what I've seen, similar roles are paying in that range, so it feels fair.
| 值得记住的说法 | 中文 |
|---|---|
| I'd like to ask for … | 我想申请……提要求时比 I want 客气 |
| paying in that range | 薪资在这个范围 |
| From what I've seen, … | 据我了解……给出依据,又不显得咄咄逼人 |
I hear you, and you've earned this conversation. But honestly, budgets are really tight this year.
我明白,你完全有资格谈这个。但说实话,今年预算真的很紧。
听懂:I hear you 我明白你的意思 · you've earned 你应得的 · budgets are tight 预算很紧
Raises above your salary band need sign-off from finance. The next chance is the mid-year review, in six months.
超出你薪资档位的涨幅要财务签字批准。下一次机会是六个月后的年中评估。
听懂:salary band 薪资档位 · sign-off from finance 财务批准 · mid-year review 年中评估
Right now I can only offer about three percent. I know that's less than you hoped. How would you like to move forward?
现在我最多只能给 3% 左右。我知道这比你期望的少。你想接下来怎么推进?
听懂:less than you hoped 比你期望的少 · move forward 往下推进
轮到你:谈下一步
如果现在给不了,争取约定六个月后再谈,并把目标写下来。
你想说的意思:如果现在做不到,那我们能不能约定六个月后再谈一次?把目标写下来,这样我们都清楚怎样算达标。
- 能说清If not now, can we talk again in six months? Let's write down clear goals.
- 自然If it can't happen now, could we agree to revisit it in six months, with clear goals in writing?
- 高密度If it can't happen now, could we agree to revisit it in six months, with clear goals in writing, so we both know what success looks like?
| 值得记住的说法 | 中文 |
|---|---|
| If it can't happen now, … | 如果现在做不到……先接受现实,再提条件 |
| agree to revisit it in six months | 约定六个月后再谈revisit=回头再议 |
| clear goals in writing | 写下来的明确目标in writing=书面的,比口头答应可靠 |
| what success looks like | 怎样才算达标 |
That's a fair ask. I'd much rather do that than lose you over a few percent.
这个要求很合理。我宁可这样,也不想为了几个百分点失去你。
听懂:a fair ask 合理的要求 · lose you over 因为……失去你
I can set up the mid-year review in the system and attach the goals, so they're on record.
我可以在系统里约好年中评估,把目标附上去,这样就有正式记录。
听懂:set up 安排、建好 · attach 附上 · on record 有正式记录
Great. So, three percent now, a proper review in six months, and we'll write the goals together on Friday. Sound good?
好。那就现在先涨 3%,六个月后正式再评一次,周五我们一起把目标写下来。可以吗?
听懂:a proper review 正式的评估 · Sound good? 这样行吗
没听清、卡住时怎么接?
这一场准备的救场的话:没听清、一时想不起词,先用一句接住,再想内容。
| 英文 | 中文 |
|---|---|
| Sorry, could you say that again? | 抱歉,能再说一遍吗 |
| Can I take a second to think about that? | 我能想一下吗 |
| Just to check I've got it right, … | 确认一下我理解得对不对…… |
| Could you put that in the summary email? | 能把这个写进总结邮件里吗 |
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