年度评估:用成绩谈加薪,谈不成也要谈出下一步

年度评估Claire · 澳大利亚口音 Priya · 印度口音

点「看一看」,Claire 和 Priya 就在这里把这一场演一遍;轮到你开口的 4 个地方会停下来,给你看要说的意思和三种说法。

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这一场在哪里,发生了什么?

周四下午 2 点,悉尼一家中型软件公司的小会议室,年度评估面谈(约 30 分钟)

今天是你的年度评估面谈,经理 Claire 主持,HR 业务伙伴 Priya 也在场,负责流程和记录。你这一年负责的两个项目都按时上线,还带了两个新人,你打算借这次机会提出加薪 10%。Claire 很认可你,但今年预算很紧。

和谁对话?

Claire
澳大利亚口音。直属经理,认可你,说话直接,但预算很紧
Priya
印度口音。HR 业务伙伴,讲流程,负责记录和后续安排

你要做到什么?

先用成绩开场:两个项目都按时上线;再说你多承担的工作:带了两个新人;明确提出涨 10%,并说明市场上同类岗位就在这个范围;如果现在给不了,争取约定六个月后再谈,并把目标写下来。

这一场轮到你开口 4 次:

  1. 讲成绩
  2. 讲多承担
  3. 提出数字
  4. 谈下一步

全文:这一场怎么说?

中英对照,不用注册。每一句都能点「听」,录音就是 App 里这一场的录音,只有角色的台词。轮到你的地方,写着你想说的意思、三种说法和值得记住的说法:能说清是短句,先保证对方听懂;自然是同事平时会说的;高密度更紧凑、信息更多。

Claire

Thanks for coming in. Priya from HR is joining us today, just to keep things on track.

谢谢你过来。HR 的 Priya 今天也参加,帮我们把流程走好。

听懂:keep things on track 让事情按流程进行

Priya

Hi! Since this is your annual review, notes go on your file. Please feel free to be open with us.

你好!这是年度评估,记录会进你的档案。有什么想法尽管直说。

听懂:annual review 年度评估 · go on your file 记入你的档案 · feel free to be open 尽管直说

Claire

So, let's start with you. How do you think this year went? What are you most proud of?

那先从你开始。你觉得这一年怎么样?最自豪的是什么?

听懂:most proud of 最自豪的

轮到你:讲成绩

用成绩开场:你负责的两个项目都按时上线。

你想说的意思:我觉得这一年挺好的。我负责的两个项目都按时上线了,没有延期。

  • 能说清
    I think it went well. Both my projects went live on time.
  • 自然
    I think it went really well. Both projects I owned went live on time, with no delays.
  • 高密度
    Honestly, it's been a strong year. Both projects I owned went live on time, and we hit every deadline.
值得记住的说法中文
it's been a strong year这一年成绩不错比 it was good 更有分量
Both projects I owned我负责的两个项目own a project=对项目全权负责
went live on time按时上线
Claire

Thanks, that matches what I've heard from the team. What else did you take on this year?

谢谢,这和我从团队那儿听到的一致。今年你还承担了什么?

听懂:matches what I've heard 跟我听到的一致 · take on 承担

轮到你:讲多承担

说你承担了更多:带了两个新人,现在他们能独立工作。

你想说的意思:我还承担了更多工作:带了两个新人,现在他们已经能独立干活了。

  • 能说清
    I also took on more work. I trained two new team members. Now they work on their own.
  • 自然
    I also took on more. I mentored two new team members, and now they're working on their own.
  • 高密度
    I also stepped up beyond my role: I mentored two new team members, and they're now working on their own.
值得记住的说法中文
stepped up beyond my role做了超出本职的事step up=主动多扛
I mentored two new …我带了两个新……mentor=带新人、当导师
working on their own能独立工作
Priya

Good, I'll note that down. Taking on more is something we really look at in this cycle.

好,我记下来。多承担工作正是这一轮评估很看重的。

听懂:note that down 记下来 · cycle (评估/调薪)周期

Claire

Now, you said you wanted to talk about pay. What did you have in mind?

你说想谈谈薪资。你心里的想法是?

听懂:pay 薪资 · What did you have in mind? 你是怎么想的

轮到你:提出数字

明确提出涨 10%,并说明市场上同类岗位就在这个范围。

你想说的意思:我希望涨 10%。我了解过,市场上同类岗位基本在这个范围,所以我觉得这是合理的。

  • 能说清
    I'd like a ten percent raise. Similar roles in the market pay about that much.
  • 自然
    I'd like to ask for a ten percent raise. Similar roles in the market are paying in that range.
  • 高密度
    I'd like to ask for a ten percent raise. From what I've seen, similar roles are paying in that range, so it feels fair.
值得记住的说法中文
I'd like to ask for …我想申请……提要求时比 I want 客气
paying in that range薪资在这个范围
From what I've seen, …据我了解……给出依据,又不显得咄咄逼人
Claire

I hear you, and you've earned this conversation. But honestly, budgets are really tight this year.

我明白,你完全有资格谈这个。但说实话,今年预算真的很紧。

听懂:I hear you 我明白你的意思 · you've earned 你应得的 · budgets are tight 预算很紧

Priya

Raises above your salary band need sign-off from finance. The next chance is the mid-year review, in six months.

超出你薪资档位的涨幅要财务签字批准。下一次机会是六个月后的年中评估。

听懂:salary band 薪资档位 · sign-off from finance 财务批准 · mid-year review 年中评估

Claire

Right now I can only offer about three percent. I know that's less than you hoped. How would you like to move forward?

现在我最多只能给 3% 左右。我知道这比你期望的少。你想接下来怎么推进?

听懂:less than you hoped 比你期望的少 · move forward 往下推进

轮到你:谈下一步

如果现在给不了,争取约定六个月后再谈,并把目标写下来。

你想说的意思:如果现在做不到,那我们能不能约定六个月后再谈一次?把目标写下来,这样我们都清楚怎样算达标。

  • 能说清
    If not now, can we talk again in six months? Let's write down clear goals.
  • 自然
    If it can't happen now, could we agree to revisit it in six months, with clear goals in writing?
  • 高密度
    If it can't happen now, could we agree to revisit it in six months, with clear goals in writing, so we both know what success looks like?
值得记住的说法中文
If it can't happen now, …如果现在做不到……先接受现实,再提条件
agree to revisit it in six months约定六个月后再谈revisit=回头再议
clear goals in writing写下来的明确目标in writing=书面的,比口头答应可靠
what success looks like怎样才算达标
Claire

That's a fair ask. I'd much rather do that than lose you over a few percent.

这个要求很合理。我宁可这样,也不想为了几个百分点失去你。

听懂:a fair ask 合理的要求 · lose you over 因为……失去你

Priya

I can set up the mid-year review in the system and attach the goals, so they're on record.

我可以在系统里约好年中评估,把目标附上去,这样就有正式记录。

听懂:set up 安排、建好 · attach 附上 · on record 有正式记录

Claire

Great. So, three percent now, a proper review in six months, and we'll write the goals together on Friday. Sound good?

好。那就现在先涨 3%,六个月后正式再评一次,周五我们一起把目标写下来。可以吗?

听懂:a proper review 正式的评估 · Sound good? 这样行吗

没听清、卡住时怎么接?

这一场准备的救场的话:没听清、一时想不起词,先用一句接住,再想内容。

英文中文
Sorry, could you say that again?抱歉,能再说一遍吗
Can I take a second to think about that?我能想一下吗
Just to check I've got it right, …确认一下我理解得对不对……
Could you put that in the summary email?能把这个写进总结邮件里吗

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